Revising Paragraphs Practice

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Revising Paragraphs Practice

Practice 1

Substantial revisions have been made to the essay about "lying with silence." For each paragraph, note the idea and function in the space provided. The first two paragraphs are done for you. Then, answer the questions that follow.

Questions

Practice 2

On a separate sheet of paper or on your computer, revise the conclusion to the "lying with silence" essay.

Answers

Practice 1

Your table should look something like this:

1. The essay is organized by order of importance, from most important to least important.
2. Probably not. For arguments, the best strategy is typically least to most important.
3. Reverse the order of the examples. Start with the diner scenario. Keep the Amy/Scott example second, and then end with the most powerful example—the man who knowingly bought a stolen necklace and gave it to his girlfriend.

Practice 2

Here's one way to revise the conclusion:

Silence can not only be deceitful—it can also be deadly. Before you decide to deceive someone with silence, consider the consequences of your action, and recognize it for what it is: a lie.