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A Framework for Writing (page 3)

By H.W. Catts|A.G. Kamhi
Pearson Allyn Bacon Prentice Hall

The Process of Writing

Among those who model the writing process, there seems to be unanimous agreement that it is a complex mental process (Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987). Compared to speaking, writing requires a high level of abstraction, elaboration, conscious reflection (Gombert, 1992), and self-regulation (Sexton, Harris, & Graham, 1998; Singer & Bashir, 1999). Models of the writing process are not concerned with very casual sorts of writing, for example, dashing off a note to a friend or a quick reminder memo. Rather, models of writing attempt to explain the composition process—how we would proceed to write an essay, or a report, or a story of some length. Another term for this type of writing is epistemic writing—the type that both advances the writer's knowledge of a topic and is credible to the reader (Bryson & Scardamalia, 1991). One well-known model conceives of writing as a problem-solving activity with three overlapping and even recursive stages2 (Hayes & Flower, 1980, 1987).  Writers first develop an internal representation of the problem and establish goals (e.g., "write a paper that effectively describes deforestation of the American Northwest, is at least five pages, and earns an A from the teacher"). In the planning phase, writers select information from their knowledge base and organize that information for an effective presentation. Subprocesses of planning include (1) generating relevant information by retrieving it from long-term memory, (2) organizing the retrieved information, (3) setting goals for the text and criteria for its evaluation, and (4) developing "en route" strategies for completing the paper (Black, 1981; Graham & Harris, 1993). Mature writers draw on their knowledge of text structure during the planning stage (e.g., "I need to follow a point-counterpoint structure for each of the three points"). Topic knowledge alone does not necessarily ensure clear writing.

In the generation phase, pen is put to paper and text is produced. Writers must now choose the words and structures that encode the meanings they wish to convey. Hayes and Flower (1987) reported that ideas in an outline are expanded by mature writers on the average by a factor of eight as text is actually generated. Writers work by producing a part of a sentence, pausing, generating the next part, pausing, all in a left-to-right manner. By studying the types of errors writers make, researchers have gained insight into the nature of the text generation process (e.g., Daiute, 1984).

Revising is the final phase of the composition model. In an attempt to improve the text, writers make changes that range from changing a word, adding a comma, to reorganizing or adding/deleting major portions. Research challenges the view of revision as an end-stage process, stressing instead the recursive nature of revising (Witte, 1983). Older writers and expert writers devote proportionally more time to revising and make changes involving larger stretches of discourse and text meaning. Revisions of younger writers and novice writers are more frequently devoted to the word or sentence level and are less apt to change the meaning.

This three-stage model of writing was devised in response to protocol analysis, a research paradigm in which writers are asked to think aloud (Hayes & Flower, 1980, 1987) as they write. Verbatim transcripts of what writers say, along with observations of what they do (e.g., analyses of pause behavior), make inherently private cognitive processes more accessible for study. Recently, think-alouds have been used to study how writing processes change with development and whether different processes are used by children with learning disabilities.

Whereas the Hayes and Flower model was designed as a model of mature, or expert writing, several researchers in children's writing have suggested modifications tailored to developmental writing. Berninger, Fuller, and Whitaker (1996) suggested eight modifications that better account for beginning and developing writing. For example, they suggested that the generating (translating) phase of writing be divided into two components: transcription (the translation of language representations in working memory into written symbols) and text generation (transforming ideas into language in working memory). This division better accounts for observed disassociations in developmental writing—children who can generate ideas but not transcribe these onto the page—and less often, the opposite—children who can transcribe but have little to "say." A second developmental perspective was provided by

Bereiter and Scardamalia (1987) who distinguished between novice and mature writing in their work. The novice writer uses a knowledge-telling model to generate a text. Like the expert writer, the novice writer sees composition as a problem to be solved, but a different kind of problem—namely one of accessing enough relevant information to satisfy length and genre requirements for the writing assignment or task. Bryson and Scardamalia (1991, p. 45) illustrated this model for the hypothetical writing assignment "Is television a good influence on children?" Two types of cues are used to generate text: topic identifiers such as "television shows" and "children," and discourse knowledge (e.g., "say what you think and then give reasons"). These cues are the entree to long-term memory where information is called up and transcribed in "think-say" cycles. The composition moves forward in a linear, sometimes associative, manner in which the mention of one point can trigger the mention of an associated point (e.g., "It's good for children to watch comedy shows. My favorite comedy show is ... ").

Expert writing, on the other hand, is described in a knowledge-transforming model (Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987). This writer is guided by a "discover what I know" rather than a "tell what I know" mandate. Presumably, the discoveries would not have come about without the act of writing. Differences between the novice and expert models are evident in longer start-up times and more extensive note-taking. Think-aloud analysis reveals an active "dialectic" between content (what the writer knows and believes) and rhetorical issues (how the writer should best say it); in the course of this internal conversation, thinking can evolve in new directions (Bryson & Scardamalia, 1991). The knowledge-transforming model is stressed increasingly in current writing pedagogy literature, particularly in response to what some perceive as an overemphasis of "vacuous" writing process instruction (Writing and Thinking, Interview with Leif Fearn, 1996). Some writers continue to use a knowledge-telling model throughout their school years and beyond.

Two additional views of the nature of writing have surfaced in recent years. First, the social-interactive model of writing (Ny strand, 1989) sees writing as fundamentally an interaction of minds—that of the writer and the hypothesized or real reader. Writing is an act of thinking as the reader would think and making text adjustments that result in a better communication. Whereas problem-solving models focus on cognitive processes of the writer, the social-interaction model emphasizes two sets of cognitive processes (the writer and the reader) and their interaction. The details of the social-interaction model are beyond the scope of this overview, but adopting the model does have implications for descriptions of writing development and for writing pedagogy (Fitzgerald, 1992). A second trend is to view writing within a broader framework of theories of self-regulated learning (e.g., Zimmerman, 1989). Basically, these models categorize a variety of strategies and feedback mechanisms whereby writers move forward in the composing process. For example, a writer could impose a minimum number of words that must be written before something less taxing (e.g., going to the movies) is done. Or, it might be necessary to rearrange the environment (e.g., move the computer to another room). Zimmerman (1989) stressed three strategies in particular—self-observation, self-judgment, and self-reaction—as critical in writing and learning. Graaham and colleagues (Graham & Harris, 1994, 1999; Graham, Harris, & Troia, 2000) have drawn extensively on self-regulation models in designing intervention approaches for poor writers.

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