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Reading Fiction Study Guide: GED Language Arts, Reading (page 4)

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Word Choice

When reading that sample sentence earlier, you were able to convey two different meanings from the same words, and you did so by changing the tone of your voice, perhaps by winking or raising an eyebrow, perhaps with subtle hand gestures. But a writer cannot use hand gestures and voice intonations on the written page, so a specific tone must be established by other means if the reader is to understand the writer's meaning fully.

One of the most common methods of conveying subtleties of tone is to select words and phrases that will communicate that tone to the reader. Read the two following passages—both of which describe the same event. Pay attention to the wording of each passage, and consider how the choices of words and phrases convey two different opinions about the event.

A.

Drew had recently broken off his engagement to Lily, and Lily was feeling pretty sad about it. Just the other day, Lily walked into a restaurant for lunch—and found that Drew was there eating with his new girlfriend.

Lily didn't know what to do, and Drew was pretty embarrassed. He just sat there, looking at Lily and not saying anything. Lily finally turned and left the restaurant. Drew and his new friend just sat and finished their lunch.

B.

Drew went and backed out of his engagement to poor Lily, and it just utterly broke her heart. Then he has the nerve to go out for lunch with his new girlfriend—and to Kitchen Little, of all places, which he knew was Lily's favorite lunch spot.

So poor unsuspecting Lily walks into the restaurant the other day for lunch—and stops dead in her tracks! There's Drew and his latest "friend" plopped right in the middle of the joint, chowing down like nothing in the world was wrong!

Lily broke down and started sobbing—and Drew just sat there and glared at her! It was horrible. Finally Lily turned on her heel and rushed out, leaving selfish Drew to finish his guilty meal.

How does the author of passage B convey a clear sense of anger and resentment? Notice some of the words and phrases that are used in passage B that are different from A: it just utterly broke her heart versus Lily was feeling pretty sad about it; Drew is described as chowing down in passage B, while he is simply eating in passage A.

Notice also how the writer of passage B has used descriptive words to make the reader feel compassion for Lily, such as poor Lily and unsuspecting Lily. Then compare the descriptive words about Drew in passage B, such as selfish and guilty. In passage A, we are told that Drew just sat there, looking at Lily, but in passage B, we are told that he glared at her. The word glared suggests something very different from the word looked, and all these words and phrases subtly guide the reader to an understanding of the author's tone: that Drew is a selfish and uncaring person who broke innocent Lily's heart.

Language and Style

Every writer has a unique style, a unique way of telling a story or expressing ideas, in the same way that every painter or sculptor or musician is said to have his or her own style. In the world of jazz, for example, the style of Louis Armstrong is very different from the style of Dizzy Gillespie—even though both musicians played the trumpet.

The same distinctions can be made in the world of fictional literature. Two writers may address the same topic, and yet their respective styles are very different. Consider, for example, these two excerpts from books about being a boy in the American Midwest. The first is from Penrod by Booth Tarkington; the second is from The Life and Times of the Thunderbolt Kid by Bill Bryson.

Penrod sat morosely upon the back fence and gazed with envy at Duke, his wistful dog.

A bitter soul dominated the various curved and angular surfaces known by a careless world as the face of Penrod Schofield. Except in solitude, that face was almost always cryptic and emotionless; for Penrod had come into his twelfth year wearing an expression carefully trained to be inscrutable. Since the world was sure to misunderstand everything, mere defensive instinct prompted him to give it as little as possible to lay hold upon. Nothing is more impenetrable than the face of a boy who has learned this, and Penrod's was habitually as fathomless as the depth of his hatred this morning for the literary activities of Mrs. Lora Rewbush—an almost universally respected fellow citizen, a lady of charitable and poetic inclinations, and one of his own mother's most intimate friends.

—From Penrod, by Booth Tarkington.

So this is a book about not very much: about being small and getting larger slowly. One of the great myths of life is that childhood passes quickly. In fact, because time moves more slowly in Kid World—five times more slowly in a classroom on a hot afternoon, eight times more slowly on any car journey of more than five miles (rising to eighty-six times more slowly when driving across Nebraska or Pennsylvania lengthwise), and so slowly during the last week before birthdays, Christmases, and summer vacations as to be functionally immeasurable—it goes on for decades when measured in adult terms. It is adult life that is over in a twinkling.

The slowest place of all in my corner of the youthful firmament was the large crackedleather dental chair of Dr. D. K. Brewster, our spooky, cadaverous dentist, while waiting for him to assemble his instruments and get down to business. There time didn't move forward at all. It just hung.

—From The Life and Times of the Thunderbolt Kid, by Bill Bryson.

These two books deal with similar things, telling humorous stories about boyhood. But the two writers deal with the subject very differently, and their two styles are also very different. Tarkington, in the first passage, has a strong vocabulary and is able to use a wide array of words to describe his character; while Bryson uses very plain, everyday language. Tarkington's sentences are formal and carefully structured and punctuated; Bryson's sentences are very casual and almost careless in the use of punctuation.

You have already seen how word choice can affect the tone of a passage, but word choice can also be an important element of style. Words are frequently used metaphorically—that is, to mean something other than the literal definition found in a dictionary. This brings us to our next topic.

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