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SAT Essay Help: Subject/Verb Agreement and Run-On Sentences (page 2)

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Updated on Dec 20, 2010

Run-on Sentences and Fragments

These are two of the most common errors on SAT essays. They are formed by incorrectly joining two or more independent clauses (complete sentences that should stand on their own) or by leaving out either the subject or verb from a sentence.

I was on the soccer team, however I enjoy playing golf.

This sentence contains two independent clauses: / was on the soccer team and I enjoy playing golf. Because they can stand alone, they can't be joined with a comma. Run-on sentences can be corrected by breaking them into two or more complete sentences, by adding a conjunction (a connecting word such as and, but, yet, or so), or by changing the punctuation. Here's a corrected version: by another example:

I was on the soccer team, and I also enjoy playing golf.
When spring break is over, we will get back to work, there will be plenty of studying to do before finals.

The clause when spring break is over is correctly attached to we will get back to work with a comma. But the second independent clause, there will be plenty of studying to do before finals cannot be joined to the first with only a comma. It is a complete sentence that can stand alone, so if it remains part of the longer sentence, it must be connected with a period or semicolon.

Fragments

Fragments are groups of words that are presented as sentences but lack a subject, a verb, or both.

The well-dressed man. Walked to school in the rain.

In the first fragment, the verb is missing. All we have is a subject. What did the well-dressed man do? In the second fragment, the subject is missing. Who walked in the rain? To correct sentence fragments, determine what is missing (subject or verb) and add it. Note that number of words has nothing to do with distinguish ing fragments from sentences—fragments can be long!

Instead of: My older sister Ellen, who traveled to Japan.

Write: My older sister Ellen traveled to Japan.

Instead of: Taking a taxi when it is raining to keep her shoes from being ruined by the water.

Write: Taking a taxi when it is raining keeps her shoes from being ruined by the water.

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